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  1. The first graph shows us that in 1985 China had no trade deficit with U.S., and Japan was the largest trade partner with nearly  40% of US imports, then Korea had nearly 20%, and the the rest of the deficit was taken by other countries except China.
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  1. According to UNICEF (the UNO's fund for helping children) there are 218 million boys and girls aged 5 to 17 in child labor all over the world and this number is not really true because most child labour is not registered and illegal, so it could not be all counted and the results may not be exactly reliable.
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  1. Child labour exists in societies that experience high levels of poverty and have many political problems, however it can also be found in cities and towns around construction, in the agricultural sector in working in houses as domestic labour and in mines and garbage dumps.
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  1. The older gentleman who owned the bakery across the street was opening the doors to his impatient customers seeking to satisfy their appetite by eating every piece of his delicious baked goods.
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  1. Cars provide the transport but also cause laziness, with cars people tend to sit in the car and ride, they will hesitate to walk or ride a bicycle.
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  1. This trend has greatly affected the way we produce and advertise our products, but I feel we can successfully sell our product, No-Sweat deodorant, through advertising that concentrates on safety for the environment and convenience for the consumer, and suggests that a certain amount of freedom from bodily odour and excessive perspiration can be gained with a minimum of damage to the ozone layer and a maximum of consumer satisfaction, notwithstanding the inevitable concerns about manufacturing costs and packaging problems, and the general tendency to avoid spray-on deodorants.
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  1. All openings in an internal or external floating roof except for automatic bleeder vents (vacuum breaker vents) and rim space vents must provide a projection below the liquid surface or be equipped with a cover, seal, or lid, which must be in a closed (i.e., no visible gap) position at all times except when the device is in actual use.
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